feedback for tilly and yasmin

L3 - GROUP 8 (Yasmin & Tilly) Film Opening Rough Cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

I think the strengths of this video are the stills of the different stereo types with pictures and a short description. I also like the way that it is written on paper to show that these stereo types especially exist in schools.

However the weakness of this idea is that the stills don't stay on screen long enough to read the description all the way through. Also because they've had to lower the quality so that the video can be streamed online it's hard to read the writing but there isn't really anything they can do about that.

The only fault i can find that they could change is some of the cuts look strange when it goes from the white stills to the video. I think this is because the still images only take up half the screen so the cross dissolve only takes up half the screen and the other half just fades in from black.

They still need to do they're titles.